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This took...FOREVER! No joke <.< Especially the black park @___@ But this drawing is lined out in colored pencil too which is VERY difficult, you have to draw it then you have to erase and reline it and blah. But it was fun, and I love how it turned out :'D So happy Fourth of July to everyone! I hope you like this 8D I'm still seeing if anyone would like to commission me, if so please tel me. I really need money <33 Art (c) Me P.S. I have no idea who that girl is xD CommentsI love the hair, and your shading is justperfect
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Yeah it wasn't easy but it was worth it : D -- God put us on this carnival ride, where it takes us next nobody knows <3 If at first you don't succeed try again damnit! = D RIP Michael Jackson ♥ Wolf buddy: ~xfoshizzlexx <3 Icon made by ~timmytier Ha, ha thank you <3
-- God put us on this carnival ride, where it takes us next nobody knows <3 If at first you don't succeed try again damnit! = D RIP Michael Jackson ♥ Wolf buddy: ~xfoshizzlexx <3 Icon made by ~timmytier What I do is draw a swirl then I just draw the curl xD It's hard to explain I might have to do a mini tutorial on it.
Thank you <3 Really? Where are you from? -- God put us on this carnival ride, where it takes us next nobody knows <3 If at first you don't succeed try again damnit! = D RIP Michael Jackson ♥ Wolf buddy: ~xfoshizzlexx <3 Icon made by ~timmytier Thank you so much <333
-- God put us on this carnival ride, where it takes us next nobody knows <3 If at first you don't succeed try again damnit! = D RIP Michael Jackson ♥ Wolf buddy: ~xfoshizzlexx <3 Icon made by ~timmytier Thanks <3
Happy Fourth! : D -- God put us on this carnival ride, where it takes us next nobody knows <3 If at first you don't succeed try again damnit! = D RIP Michael Jackson ♥ Wolf buddy: ~xfoshizzlexx <3 Icon made by ~timmytier |
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July 4
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EASTMAN KODAK COMPANY
KODAK EASYSHARE C613 ZOOM DIGITAL CAMERA 1/8 second F/2.7 6 mm 200 Apr 10, 2007, 5:39:07 PM Share
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Critiques
Originality: Very original~
Technique: Colored Pencil is very difficult to master. (This might get long, as there are so many objects) The fireworks themselves are a bit strange... mainly the one in the top right corner. I really like the flag but it should be 5x10 with the stars and I can see that it is probably 7x10 which seems like it would just be a waste of your strength and time to color. The proportions seem to be fine but there are parts where her bones seem to be broken. (left arm and leg) The large red firework is nice and shiny but it needs shading at the bottom or highlights (considering there are explosions going on) to make the main part appear more 3-D. The little one beside it could use more highlights. My favorite part is the "America" display at the top. It shows that you really understand how the fireworks move and how much you can see of the letters themselves. A bit more contrast was needed here and there but it my computer monitor is horrible so I can not comment much on that and this is a photo, which makes it more difficult.
Impact: I think it's a great piece with a lot of color and very patriotic. I believe it would be more dramatic if she were clinging to the rocket she's riding on. Areas were you used implied 3-D look very nice. And the black background shows that you were working very hard! ^_^
And that's that
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