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My Secret Place

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Here is another finished piece from art class ;D I know there's mistakes but I still want critique. Please don't diss on it though like, "this utterly sucks." I want to know how I can improve.

But nothing on the sky please the water color at my school SUCKS! and there were no blues ; n ;

But this is a place I'd love to be when everything gets bad.

By the way the FOX in the tree (cannot draw animals) is my character. He's Kyiku's pet I guess you could say.

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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Wow, very nice picture! The flowers are very nicely put, and the tree's branches stick out by so much. The cat in the corner looks adorable, and the proportioning is goog on it.

The cat is very nice. The shading was done very well! 8D I like the cats ear and how it perks up, the right foot is also cute.

The person is perfectly proportion on the main body, but if you look at feet, they are much smaller than you think. The boots look like they cut off the leg a little bit and because the black color almost blends with the tree it sort of looks a little unproportioned. But when you take the body and put it on the legs two times it makes sense.

I noticed by the feet and in some area's that it get blurrier... Just a little something...

The tree has a very nice color flow on the side, and almost reminds me of clothe wrinkles. The lighting is also very nice on the bark of the tree.

That's about it, very nice picture!